25 word pitch development

We came up with our original pitch after brainstorming initial ideas as a group. This pitch is shown below:

However after developments to our idea our storyline has changed, luckily this change is only minor and doesn't affect any other work we have done so far. Our storyline still contains 'two men' and 'one girl' however the protagonist is no longer in a situation where he has to 'run away fast' however he does have to run fast to save the woman he loves.

 

In order to make the pitch match the developed synopsis I simply removed the word 'away'. Now both the synopsis and pitch match and work togther:

 

His love for her is strong enough to kill.
Two men.
One girl.
One Obsession.
One love and One cynical plan.
Run  fast.